This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2013-06-02 22:46:01 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Happenscape

In the mind's eye,     an earth in upheaval  Surging heated contempt    a cleansing flow as Renewing as intense Plodding time cannot   chance alone cannot Spring the willow its grace   give meaning to embrace Permit eloquence to that   utterance closest to the heart

Copyright © June 2013 James C. Horak

Additional Notes:
The device I'm using here is what I call parallelism.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2013-06-24 13:49:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Intresting device. I read this piece four times in order to wholly take it in. Of course there is no tech errors. Reminds me very much of Shakesphere. Thank you for the poem and another tool for poets to use to express the sometimes inexpressable.


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