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Out Walking in Snowfall The path lead into wood. Other hands had beaten it With purposes the same, yet different. Another owl Watched my climb from the same tree that haunted Them, that limbed their memories and flight into the same indifferent sky That swallowed their impressive cry Where only night and light would never die. Would never die . . . because I carried them, Up the hill beneath the passing swallows, Through heaven’s flashing, through gently falling snow, Through winds that searched, with nowhere else to go. A cabin built in 1932, its skeleton still proud, That housed some lightly sleeping child, that stirred With laughter and the common words, had waited As if it knew a man would come again to oppose his fantasy to what the army of the years had done, To sit a space and lift his glass to what was past, To find the strength for what we knew would come. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-01-01 13:27:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
This sounds like a coming home poem. I get the same feelings when ever I go back home and check out my old school, its play ground and all the memories that go with that. That you were the lightly sleeping child. The work could easily be a painting.