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The Walk of Shame No walk of shame today Stayed home, did not play Thus saved a few dimes to write this rhyme Not giving my brain a chance to tattle on my heart Or my heart a chance to give away my soul There is no emotional gutter to find myself in, yet again No need of hair of the dog to clear the smog or lift the fog for a heart too eager to love At all cost has a price sometimes cheap sometimes thrice the intentions of my hope |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-01-18 13:26:42
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Joe, a very simple piece; but for those of us who have traveled thus- the level of truth exists. I was very interested in the assonance of dog/fog/ love, very original.
Thank you for sharing.