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Love Waits Love waits reading a newspaper tapping her foot to the rhythm of a song not yet shared Love drinks a glass of wine as delicate as her soul Time sits beside her like a low maintence friend Chatting words unheard Loving in the silence |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-04-27 09:39:47
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Joe, how splendid, how succinct. (maintenance). There is quite a lot of pleasure in reading this piece. Each stanza, each line is perfect.
Of time being “low maintenance”, I will grant the benefit of the doubt… although it flows effortlessly, I am not sure love unrequited considers it low maintenance, at least not when subjected to the human inference! Still, what a wonderful line!
The sharing of Love and Time, now what a mating; and how comfortable they are in unspoken togetherness.
Really, spectacular piece.