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What Happened Where did it go The unshakeable belief In something so beautiful In something greater then ourselves greater then our selfish egos What happen to the love that was more ageless then rocks To a faith that was as unshakeable as the universe Are we so much like bubbles that we can't take a tap Are we so much like so snowflakes that we can not take the heat I hope so much more for poets As much as I hope for any child |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-05-30 20:56:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Times have changed so much over the course of the past ten years it is inconceivable to think of some of the events along with the seemingly stoic emotions of the general population is now considered the norm.
I hesitate to think why others see progress when I see less than what I used to consider a more compassionate universe.
Your poem is clear and concise and I believe those who speak of faith do just that - speak of it,
very nicely written,
Deni