This Poem was Submitted By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-05-20 22:20:23 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!

Click Here To add this poem to your "Voting Possibilities" list!


What Happened

Where did it go  The unshakeable belief  In something so beautiful  In something greater then ourselves  greater then our selfish egos  What happen to the love  that was more ageless then rocks  To a faith that was as unshakeable  as the universe  Are we so much like bubbles  that we can't take a tap  Are we so much like so snowflakes  that we can not take the heat  I hope so much more  for poets  As much as I hope for  any child 

Copyright © May 2014 Joe Gustin


This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-05-30 20:56:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Times have changed so much over the course of the past ten years it is inconceivable to think of some of the events along with the seemingly stoic emotions of the general population is now considered the norm. I hesitate to think why others see progress when I see less than what I used to consider a more compassionate universe. Your poem is clear and concise and I believe those who speak of faith do just that - speak of it, very nicely written, Deni


This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-05-21 20:14:39
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Joe, I am still hoping to make it all work. What happened? I’ll let history do its own long division. I find the future much more entertaining. As for your piece; let me just add an Amen. Very well put. Quite inspirational. Thank you for sharing it.
Poetry Contests Online at The Poetic Link

Click HERE to return to ThePoeticLink.com Database Page!