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Magic Glasses Landslides of liquor wash up memories induce immodesty sustain a void that neglects inner respect exposing an outer image where frankness kept deeply inside magnifies portraits of truth most often feigning a brief escape to jump in to the arms of gratification with a murky haze subdued by the monster that can’t be faced |
Additional Notes:
Punctuation left out on purpose
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-06-01 07:40:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Very excellent writing here. I have felt your words,been that person more then once or twice in my life. What i love most about this poem is that is does not hold anything back.There is some uncomfortable truth in every line
The ending neatly ties it all together and says it all Brilliant work.