This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-07-14 23:41:25 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Revealing Anew

Do not  follow me  through the dark black waters allow me  to continue  feeling the cold pressing on until the sensation of warmth  swathes my spirit enough caresses my  entire being doubling clarity  chancing my return welcoming everything good creation refuses to deny 'till my soul mends of morbid pain in elation

Copyright © July 2014 DeniMari Z.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-07-18 09:53:03
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Deni, I am not sure (other than crossing over) whether this speaks of a physical or purely mental/emotional respite. The thoughts you dwell on, of “morbid pain” and “warmth” “swathes my spirit”, are depths to pinnacle. I am inclined to view the entire piece as loss and the romanticism of recovery. That said, the contrast is wide and evident; and one hopes the writer finds the sought, before the difficulties become that much more binding.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-07-15 00:48:12
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
OMG What the hell was that but complete poetry in motion or should I say emotion. Brave on dear poet brave on
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