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Train Stop Does the engineer see what's plain to you and me Ahead the washed out bridge yet still it's full steam ahead The somber watch the children aisles sparkling with their run Entranced the next day will come like dawn brought today |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-09-02 21:34:32
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I think of the engineer in this poem as the heart. The mind can see the bridge is out but the heart stokes the engine. The imagery in this work is a sparkling as the children's run. Excellent write