This Poem was Submitted By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2014-08-25 10:59:35 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Old Flame

                                                                      will never die out because it doesn’t burn, yet                                                                       (like everything else, those leaves of summer,                                                                       in the old metal can of the world                                                                       but it is a real fire, fed by your sinews,                                                                       shot from the sun, a white spot through the magnifying glass                                                                          of you                                                                       nothing can touch her, conceived as she is,                                                                       a woman with a ghostly conception                                                                       the old men, the sages, say it                                                                       your old man, your brothers, have it                                                                       each man has his own Immaculata                                                                       the general, and the bright particular                                                                       the oddest things are clutched, being most brittle                                                                       her getting into a car, her walking into school                                                                       a piece of clothing, a sweater, the stands on the football field                                                                       each thing a liberation, and a bar in your prison                                                                       a yellowing envelope, a fifteen cent stamp                                                                       an address to a street and a house that perhaps stands)                                                                       what it touches burns to the ground.

Copyright © August 2014 Mark Steven Scheffer


This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-09-02 21:46:41
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
OMG. Wow. This is as powerful as it is painful and delightful to read. There are so many ways this poem touches common ground. Not in the actual places and events, but each of them are easily substituted for events and places to each reader that will read this. A Rosetta stone for pain and passion


This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-08-30 09:45:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Mark, I apologize for my tardiness, been on the road all month, and a loved one had a stroke, it has been a trying time- but we get on, don’t we? What of this piece, other than its beautiful composition, can be expostulated? It is, and we all know it is, and she was/is/will be, and we recall as the rationale of the moment drives us to recall. And then- there love is, once again, or just plain damn lust, who knows. It yet remains. Very well said. What a dance! I wonder if S2L2 should begin with - are - or S3L1 - are a real fire-
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