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I Want To Critique Your Poem I Want To Critique Your Poem With all my Being, I want to understand your poem. I know it has greater things to show me than I can even imagine. I want each line to come and get me with its clawed feet and drag me into its inter sanctum of wisdom, a wisdom I have yet to understand. I want it to shake me to my core, to pry open the closed places in my thirsty soul and pour the waters of your experience into my empty cups. That is how bad I want to understand it. I want your chosen words, your carefully chosen words, to weave through my brain and cause stars to explode and new worlds to go shooting past me with revelations that I was unable to capture before I read your poem. I want it to meld into my experience and have a great, earth-shaking “Aha” moment, worthy of the celebrations of cosmic worlds coming together. I want to feel your metaphor, I want to experience your tiniest conjunction as though stars spun on its narrowest ledge. Do you see now? Do you see how badly I want to understand your poem? |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-09-25 10:19:43
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I could image every line as though you were painting a picture, let alone a poem. Excellent choice of words to convey just how badly you want to critique a poem. I would guess based on what I have read, you would certainly
be qualified. This was a brilliant rendering. A picture perfect poem. Thanks for sharing