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Within the Poem
Within The Poem A poem, an expression in thought Without limitations as to style otherwise one will become lost in the structure A flow which creates it's own music Lush, sumptuous, methodical Yet not always pleasant A truth which only the author knows Others must only guess that they feel The internal sensation A moment grasped from the past Which must be released Or death prevails on the thought If death is conveyed Then life is lived If love is the answer Then life is full If sorrow is known Then happiness fulfilled If an answer is given Then the question will Be Within the Poem
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This Poem was Critiqued By: Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. On Date: 2014-11-28 19:22:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Absolutely great. I don't mean to transfer my thoughts onto you, but all of my poems are written for me and rarely to any particular or general audience. I am very selfish though. I do greatly appreciate it when someone sees more in me than I do, or than what I truly know exists. My narcissism...not meant to be projected on you or anyone else. But it does reflect what I perceive is the truth and the power of what you have written. Outside of myself (if that is possible), your writing is a very accurate "expression" of what poetry is and as you so precisely and exquisitely wrote, "If an answer is given Then the question will Be Within the Poem" Perfect! Medard
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