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Thought Thought Rippling waves reaching the shore as the sand accepts the moisture of time |
Additional Notes:
Although not necessary according to some it should be in the 5-7-5 format....Here is what I did.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Marcia L McCaslin On Date: 2014-11-05 18:30:34
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Site still not fixed, but better. I like the 5-7-5 better. Alliteration is interesting; I had just put on a more detailed critique than this, but site went haywire and obliterated everything I did. Anyway. 5-7-5 my preference. Thanks for posting