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I circle no world Minute lights in the black sky photons never realized by nearsighted eyes years witness the speed life defies all so silent because none hear the cry I am a god unknown to no one I am so complete, I am not here I hold time a hostage, as entertainment I circle no world seen from the ground Motions no Newtonian laws describe distorting gravity, time, and all sight all thoughts and memories have no place in this universe there is nothing to feel I am a god known to everyone I am the answer, I am everywhere I hold you accountable for what I am I circle no world seen from the ground Calculations can never define because no matter what is questioned the simple answers are not explained by simply asking why I am a god unknown to you I am the creator, I am everything I hold you, a puppet, to play my game I circle no world seen from the ground Moments are not meant to be remembered they are only given to be lived a waste of the light is a waste of energy irreplaceable, revoked, forgotten, unlived I am a god known only to me I am all you are, I am you I can not hold you accountable to anyone I circle no world seen from the ground I am not a god, I am a line bent by the hand of another god |
Additional Notes:
Drivels of a line
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2015-08-25 08:46:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.75000
One quatrain after another, I kept thinking boy, this line sure does think a lot of itself. I'd say the line was driveling up until the last two lines. Then somehow, it got smacked hard. Physics was one of my favourite subjects and I loved all the references to it. Very nice concept.