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New Years In a world of whims and new found foes where am I to go what paths should I ponder What was white is now black What was was pure is now ponderous Living now in a unkind maze full of delights and nightmares days My God is not listening My angels have turned away The devil has his arms outreached Welcoming me to his unwanted home I don't know if the morning can save my soul but the sun keeps trying |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2016-03-01 23:58:22
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Joe, this is more dark than any of your other poems I've read - you've given the reader fine written lines that bring out the emotions in this piece - changes cause gaps in life - I don't believe you've been forgotten - I do believe the higher power cares - and this home is only temporary - Within you lies the answer - and I believe if you work at it daily - the answer will come - bringing a more positive path for you - to save your soul and allow you to see the colors in life again.
Good read-
blessings,
Deni
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