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In Safe Hands Stars above iridescent sight allow my heart to render peace tonight dreams tucked under moonbeams warm with love wrap my tender spirit with serenity from above keep a circle of heavenly light‘round my home while I rest in your glorious arms protection I’ll receive 'till the first break of dawn |
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No punctuation intended. Revision of a poem I submitted three years ago -
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-03-01 21:55:07
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Such a lovely poem to read after a very long day. It makes my soul restful just by reading it. I esp fine the lines seven and eight to be inspired. I so now want a hot chocolate to lay down with and let my mind drift away. Thank you. No punctuation needed.