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The Rigid Breed Cold hearts cannot soften once grounded anchored through too many years that pass they’ve spit out their vermin while considering their sermons highly dignified personified with class Not one word could be heard from the many that tried to get in For the cold heart is a closed heart that beats just to keep life alive until their very lonely end |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2016-03-30 15:33:04
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Deni,
Well, it seems you have been pursuing this vein. :)
The first stanza is what shines in this.
Mark