This Poem was Submitted By: Michael Bird On Date: 2016-06-26 12:31:53 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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So Long Old Friend

The time to say goodbye is near Instead of goodbye I`ll say so long Even though we got lost on trail I`m still a better man after knowing you You`ve many new projects And never ending hashes -I just want to make that clear So for now,instead of goodbye I`ll say so long Sure will miss you when your gone.

Copyright © June 2016 Michael Bird

Additional Notes:
Another fallen hasher--with a little help from Randy Newman On-On old friend

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2016-07-01 11:54:34
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Michael I am assuming this Hasher is Melanie as well, of the Hash House Harriers (I needed a greater appreciation for your previous verse, (I donít like being found lacking in my attempt to understand the craft of another.)) Anyway- The Randy Newman connection is well done, (a very underrated lyricist. The tribute speaks volumes of you. Thank you again for letting me ramble.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-06-28 10:30:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.66667
Its always sad when friends drift away more so of course when they are old friends. The hurt of that comes through in this poem in a simple and convincing way
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