This Poem was Submitted By: Paul H. Roefs On Date: 2016-08-12 13:16:13 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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ENCHANTING SKY

Weeping rains cleansing away Tears of time from another day Sun and clouds in their design Bring hope to our changing time Winds create our skies above Surrence our hearts to love Surrounding us with pageantry Should we bow to this majesty Mighty display of silent wonder Looking up causes up to ponder The sun warms our hearts so shy This beautiful enchanting shy

Copyright © August 2016 Paul H. Roefs


This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2016-09-03 08:41:46
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
I'm sure you already know that the last word ended up a typo. Otherwise, gentle descriptions of the usual, but abound with hope of a brighter tomorrow.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2016-08-30 15:28:36
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Paul you create a delicate feel with this poem...gentle and soft aura lends itself to your easy read. I do have to ask, what the word was that you were going for in the second stanza line 2 (perhaps-insurance)? In your last stanza, was the last word in the last line suppose to be "sky" and not "shy"? An enjoyable read. Best always, Lora
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-08-24 17:18:31
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
I feel like I am looking at a worded art work from the Group of Seven. Your imagery here is so complete as if I were standing there witnessing the same sky. Beautiful.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2016-08-12 16:29:10
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Paul, I do love a constant, Love Me Do, beat. You started out slam bumppa bam! Towards the end you let you meter slide a little and lost that driving beat. S2L2, first word must be a typo, don’t know what it is. I think S3L2 the second up should be “us”. Love stories, the pride and perpetuity of the poet. I enjoyed this read! I will say, stanza 1- powerful drive! Thanks for sharing
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