This Poem was Submitted By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-10-14 04:20:57 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Her

I hold her near closer then the wind More precious then sunlight dearer then rain She nothing if not perfect Past and future in  prefect tense Songs not in need of  lyrics Poems in no need  of rhyme
Copyright © October 2016 Joe Gustin

This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2016-10-23 11:30:57
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Another very gently flowing poem from you.. I will never cease to tilt my head at the screen when I read some expressions you use to describe your love/appreciation of someone/something. Only one comment - you've said then so often - I believe it's than?

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2016-10-16 10:08:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.50000
Joe, this takes the literary construct, blending it into the precious allegory of love. S2 L1 “is”? This is a resonant piece. It is the love of love, love of writing, and love of her. Past and future perfect tense is perfect. (Although, most less enthusiasts these days, you’d have to explain what it meant!). Well done Joe. Well Done.
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