This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2017-01-18 09:52:42 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Chasing Paradise

Illusions A full moon seems to slide by while clouds drift then shift through the darkest sky Gazing brilliance miracles visited from centuries upon more to those who appreciate celestial beauty or wonder if the gates of “Heaven” await us with an open door 

Copyright © January 2017 DeniMari Z.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2017-01-23 08:57:43
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Deni, this should be the opening of a short story, of life and the transport of creation. What a beautiful scene, I could feel the impact of the allegory build within. Having found myself in like thought much of these last years, I easily felt that what beset, also besought, and the precedent of a sort of celestial liberty was also the resident of our lives. Thank you much for this inspirational vision, truly it was a vision in my mind.


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