This Poem was Submitted By: Jolene M DePonceau On Date: 2000-07-17 20:51:52 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Mesmerized a.k.a. My Sweetness-Part 2

Your love crashed into me like a wrecking ball And when I stared into  your delicious blue eyes I couldn't help but fall... When your tantalizing smile lit upon me I felt the first spark of loves insanity until I was swirling             swirling dizzied up on the carousel of you             Twirling             twirling mesmerized by your cotton candy hue             Flying             flying on your madcap magic carpet ride             Floating             floating in the sweet giddy nectar of us- side by side

Copyright © July 2000 Jolene M DePonceau


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