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Lost Inside the deep blue stream... trickles down my soul. Soothes me to sleep. Breath of air in a dream. Mirrors reflection.... Visions perception.... of what is real. To taste. To touch To feel... Trapped in this flesh of steel. Bound by chains that conceal An energy that we feel. Too human to leap across. For fear of getting lost. The unknown is a terrain. We dare not cross. Leap of faith over The stream. That trickles down. to soothe my scream. Forever dancing in my mind. which I have struggled to find. A delicate spring to unwind. |
Additional Notes:
This is my first submission ever. I am very shy about my work and usually keep things to myself.
I want to learn how to become a better writer and poet and hope that you will all help me on my journey.
I have to admit that I do not really intentionally rhyme It just come out that way I don't know if this hurts my work or helps it. I would just really like honesty. Thank you all I hope to get to know you all and your work.
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