This Poem was Submitted By: Jodi R Smith On Date: 2000-08-18 11:45:55 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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The Boy

The boy looks up A tall figure hovers overhead A giant in the boys' eyes He reaches to hold the giants hand It swallow his Large and warm A perfect fit He sees his hero  Capable of anything "Hold me, daddy" The small voice requests Inviting arm raise him Holding him close, tight He's tall now Tall like daddy "Someday" the boy imagines "I'll be just like him" "Someday" the father hopes "He'll be better than me"

Copyright © August 2000 Jodi R Smith

Additional Notes:
I am totally new to this...so please go easy on me. I had several ideas for poems come to me recently and this was one of them. I hope you all like it. Thank you


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