This Poem was Submitted By: Mark G Love On Date: 2000-08-25 14:01:49 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Work With Me

              I've tried so many other things  To make you understand That time now stands still for us  You may have to take my hand Follow me, and I shall lead  A path, down by the river Drown our misunderstandings  So we may work together Unequal thoughts we have Distant feelings do drive Those wonderful times together  May not come to thrive I wonder if it's all worth it  Time is now eclipsed For better things to happen  Together we must lift Pounds and pounds of problem  Are now released from us Needed to do it together  I believe it was worth the fuss

Copyright © August 2000 Mark G Love


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