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CRYING BRIGHTNESS The long pilgrimage up the stairs of the kingdom of clowds leading to the great gathering of sweet sweet thoughts from where they voyage brightly through the quiet path of glowing shooting stars in the memory of long forgotten wishes flying as a flock of millions of dreams to a great unnamed place somewhere within the skies while the trail of enchantment leads to wherever my heart lyes in a priceless moment called paradise from above the great land of the gods. The fountain of loving tears pour into the sacred river moving through the unseen clowds of forever tonight forming an eclipse of pure sacrifice for the one & only beloved heart strolling by the shadowed tears in search of only mine in a clear night of crying brightness of stars where love is held up high somewhere beyond the clowds. |
Additional Notes:
i felt that the use of punctuations would weaken it so i prefared not to use them.
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