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Part One: The Beginning. How is this suposed to end I ask you? I dont think anything but black black,dark,lost and numb traveling through the innerworkings of space the space that exists between the two pillars is there actually such a place or am I not there? Now my color is blue as blue as your fucking eyes lose me, lose me in this I say I see a light above the sky is it coming for me? White has now become my color as white as a diamonds purity or as black as my fucking heart lost between the colors of the mind and the everchanging moods of the sun where do I fit into this game? drag me away, drag me away into the vast oceans of nowhere bleed I say, bleed the ink that you call blood the sun stares at me and laughs I kindly laugh back and now I have become yellow as yellow as your soft blonde hair take me away, lose me in the void in my eyes reflects the evil of such things I devour lost in your eyes forever I only exist exist to?????????? and slowly lose all color and eventually fade away. |
Additional Notes:
This one is wierd,the only punctuation i used were ? marks. I dont know why it just seemed cool. I dont like to write poems that have distinct sentences in them. I think I would lose alot ao meaning if most of my work was in normal sentence format. I hope you all like it.
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