This Poem was Submitted By: Alan W Goodson On Date: 2000-10-17 21:20:34 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Coffee Shop

Old men with nothing to do, Who've yet to get started... A circle of old friends, their coffee hot and bitter, like their memories of youth gone by. Reliving the past with half-remembered stories, half-baked lies, and imagined truths only half-discovered. Their days now as lifeless as crumpled leaves scattered by the cold, hard winds of yesterdays that were once their tomorrows. The remaining days of their lives measured in cups of lament, filled to the brim with memories of paths not traveled, chances not taken, and love never found, fading slowly in the haze of soft regret. Their untapped wells of knowledge, with life experience seeping through, form stagnant pools of advice for youth who don't listen, don't care, and don't know or wonder about frail words spoken in meaningful jest, by old men whose lives don't seem to matter anymore. Old men with nothing to do, Finished before the day begins... Now left to compare scars of battles with life and secrets of success never quite obtained. Steam rising from their cups, like the spirit of their youthful dreams, drifting off into thin air, to mingle with the stale smoke of bridges burned. Their weathered faces hide behind wrinkled masks, sculptured by pain earned from hard work, harder lessons, and hardest times. Arguing grumpily over the bill that comes due because they feel all their debts have been paid in full, with interest. The hands of the clock seem to move more swiftly now, speeding onward towards eternity, towards rest, towards another world where the coffee is free, the waitress doesn't expect a tip, and the tables are always clean. Old men with nothing to do, And an eternity to finish...

Copyright © October 2000 Alan W Goodson

Additional Notes:
No offense intended towards our learned elders. Just a few stray thoughts I had (and wrote on a napkin) while sitting in a local coffee shop.


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