This Poem was Submitted By: Thomas F Crumpler On Date: 2000-10-27 18:50:05 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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The Hero

 Once I was faced with some serious trouble,   so deeply dark and miserably, depressed.   Then God brought to me this wise fellow,   Who showed how to be eased of my stress.   A grim experience, terribly overwhelming.  My life was dreadfully and painfully, sad!   But, this hero told me about something,  'Best advice anyone, for me ...ever had.   He revealed just one simple little secret,     Which is such a wonderful philosophy.    Just an easy motto, we all can remember.     And Wow! What a change it made for me!    What was it? You might ask that he taught.     Aren't you just about,  dying to know?   The answer is if you change your thoughts,   Then soon, your life's most sure to follow.    So now Thanks to him, my friend the Hero, I have decided to apply in my life, this fact. Living has been truly good since then, I know It's brighter days ahead & never looking back! 

Copyright © October 2000 Thomas F Crumpler

Additional Notes:
This is a polished up version of The Hero. I want to thank my critiques for their expert opinions! I valued them to master this poem. Line 8 has a mild compensation. Again, Thanks Poets


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