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TO MY BRINNY SUE Our age, like a page, In the midst of a book. We keep learning, pages turning, Anxious for a brand new look. Like good wine, more age is fine. We just get better. More pages turn, and more we learn, And then I met her. One so upbeat, so very sweet, My heart just melted. One I adore, with such allure, Her love I felt it. I know the older we will get, The love we share becomes more pure. Of course we'll age, and ache, and yet, Our love will grow, and will endure. So worry not my little sphinx. You're very hot, you're my hi-jinx. We'll be as one, at any age. Let's have some fun, let's turn a page. |
Additional Notes:
This is a love poem to my wife Sue. She always thought of changing her name to Brinn;
thus the title. She is so "wonderful". I am so "lucky'.
Jay D. Savitz
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