This Poem was Submitted By: Danielle Lynne Cathers On Date: 2000-12-08 19:34:13 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Vulnerability

Sitting inside a room of my demise  sympathetic eyes penetrate my confidence. My skin swarm with insects  Crawling locusts of uncertainty cloud my unattainable sky. vulnerability- I hide behind the faces of dead presidents residing on bits of combustible paper. Watching my future burn I embrace the arsonists scattering ashes inside the shifting wind  blowing between us. I am vulnerable- Difficult weather   Looms on the horizon. Lost illusions  mass confusion swirl in low pressure. A massive system pirouetting by an astonished audience All are vulnerable-

Copyright © December 2000 Danielle Lynne Cathers

Additional Notes:
Well, tell me what you think of this one. I have been playing around with the structure and appreciate any suggestions you all may have. Thank you for reading: )


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