This Poem was Submitted By: elizabeth m casey On Date: 2000-12-18 21:14:34 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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And how… I’d realized, this function. (hadn’t you known that you’d made it all worth my while!) and how could I try and rationalize that We even had a place in You… had erased my inner disgust, denounced my previous images… and even as the Miles leads me on, (he is not to be named my Muse as you are!) and as for your Song, I’d hoped you’d understand—it doesn’t get any better than that! but still, I’d have to lie back… justify letting go I think you saw the tremor in my hands,  but we both know you found the source! It’s all water now (and that you even caused a ripple is the same) and maybe tonight when I try to sleep, I’ll lie awake for an hour or so, wrapped in your shirt, or a memory of something similar

Copyright © December 2000 elizabeth m casey

Additional Notes:
okay, it's abrupt, i know. i'm working on that. just do me a favor. everybody tear this piece the heck apart. i still have some analyzing to do, and i'm hoping some outside analysis will do the trick.


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