This Poem was Submitted By: Rick Phillip Angus On Date: 2000-12-21 18:01:27 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Rendered Tenderly

i can feel you creeping down my spine, tingling the emotion i kept hidden for so long. what makes you think you can walk into my life, and pull the fear from a bond so strong. cowardly wailing in discrepancies of abnormality, abandoning the fruitless ways to tear me down. indiscriminatly you falter to your knees, too weak to pick the crumbs from the ground. wallowing in discontenting circumstance, praying for the undesirable acceptance of death. forgotten in a timely fashion of receipt. unannouncing to the masses your unfavorable wish to bargain your soul to the maker. ending the epophany of hope from which love was co-created. painfully and abruptly saying goodbye, with the pleasure and prowess to forgive, and unquestionably able to forlornly give the destitute child an answer. without regret, resentment, or any disallusionment, to proudly say i love you.

Copyright © December 2000 Rick Phillip Angus

Additional Notes:
once again my broken heart is spewed onto the page. and also once again i purposely kept lower case to keep a mood of sadness.i hope i did that well. thank you for reading.


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