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In Love And Undecided As eager as I am to get to you, I'm cautious enough to ask for truth. Not that I don't trust the words you speak, but I've been made to play the fool for all to see. Those foolish games we like to play, when love gets mixed with hate. The hurtful words we love to say, right to each other's face. It's not that I don't think, that you're the one for me. It's just I've learned from life, that things aren't always what they seem. So don't be freightened by my cautiousness, you're everything I need. You're the hand upon my shoulder, that always comforts me. |
Additional Notes:
this poem was written to express my feelings towards someone i'm not too sure of. this person is wonderful and the only thing is that she lives far from me. i don't know if i should go for it or not. she absolutley incredible though and so i've been stuck on this issue. this was the result. i welcome any comments and suggestions here. thanx for reading and enjoy
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