This Poem was Submitted By: Suzanne Updike On Date: 2001-01-06 18:28:17 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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How can I write what I feel When feelings are like water Constantly moving, thrashing around And words are like rocks Obstacles to overcome So feelings can move about. How do I say what is in my heart When emotions are infinite Endless currents And the words can't describe What is there without limitations Without constraint. How do I relate what is on my mind When the thoughts are so fast So fleeting, that when I pause To remember, they're gone So brief their life So quickly dimmed their light.

Copyright © January 2001 Suzanne Updike

Additional Notes:
If anyone has a suggestion for a title, I would be most appreciative. For some reason a title has eluded me


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