This Poem was Submitted By: Jolene M DePonceau On Date: 2001-01-08 08:25:33 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Brilliant

Do not tumble away my sweet- Our effervescent shimmering has not left- It is only blotted out by   a silly cloud from time to time, fluttering around on frustrations wings, spurred on by the momentum of fear. The air between us is forever pure and sweet, full of promise and heavy with aroma- The scent of roses, and lilacs, and hyacinth, hang steadily and pungently along the ivy clad golden span, free of lies and pretense, girded by truth- The strength of our love. Expectations may curdle  within the wax from time to time, muddying up the wick while the breath of disappointment causes our brilliant dazzle to momentarily flicker, but it will only be for  the briefest of moments. Do not tumble away my sweet- Our effervescent shimmering has not left. Iím beckoning you to follow me and see for yourself, that behind this little cloud, lies the blinding glare of you and me.

Copyright © January 2001 Jolene M DePonceau


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