This Poem was Submitted By: Robin Ann Crandell On Date: 2001-01-11 06:29:53 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Heaven and Hell

So are you having fun Ruining my life: killing me slowly The hatred has just begun You know how much this meant to me Knowingly: purposely: maliciously Let me up  I can't see My blood is turning cold This is the story you once told My heart has turned to ice It's my heart which pays the price Heaven and hell just one step away Why to care, it's me you betray I am drowning, I can't breathe Let me up  Let me see So are you having fun Did you accomplish your task  You need to take off your angels mask You already broke me  My world has been shattered Black and blue Wait, I might like being battered Heaven and hell just one step away Why to care, it's me you betray I am drowning, I can't breathe Let me up  Let me see So are you having fun The shackles are on too tight You win, I give up this fight Just hit me again, I just might die Would you care then No, you wouldn't even cry So what if I wasn't here Heaven and hell just one step away Why to care, it's me you betray I am drowning I can't breathe Let me up  Let me see

Copyright © January 2001 Robin Ann Crandell


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