This Poem was Submitted By: paul lee kannel On Date: 2001-01-12 20:51:28 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Breaking Point

The world goes on without sanity We kill each other for no reason can't you see? For hats for coats and money for drugs I'm sick and tired and hate all of you thugs! You don't care for anyone let alone me But get it in your head I feel the same way about you can't you see! Keep your attitude to yourself, keep it at home stop bringing it to me! You don't like me and for my privacy you don't care Back off do you hear me or I'll break you I swear! I've had it with your disrespectful attitudes Just leave me alone I'm not in the mood! You've went too far you've gone over the line Stay in your own yards to commit all of your crimes! I'm tired of hurting, I'm tired of hiding, I'm tired of leaving my pride 20 feet behind me! I know who you are and its you I accuse I have nothing left to give, I have nothing left to lose! If you come back around let me make this clear It is not I that will lose it's your family that will shed the tears! You don't belong out here mocking my love and me Because of a mistake that they made you're here to walk free! People have died for many centuries It's a shame that people like you slip through in this reality. I believe in the law and following the path of justice But those that know you know you're guilty and you thoroughly disgust us! I know you're back, I know you're free, I don't have time to plead Just go away and stay away if you come back I'll make you bleed!

Copyright © January 2001 paul lee kannel

Additional Notes:
This poem was meant to be read in the form of a rap song and with extreme frustration and anger. I hope that this does not offend anyone I was trying to portray the frustrations and aggravations that many of us have went through in our lives and hopefully prevent the younger generation from thinking that we are all helpless and without feeling. I truly hope that in the way this is written in a "rap music theme" that the younger generations will relate to this and understand. Thank you all for reading my poem. God Bless.


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