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the perfect time I looked, expecting to see something that no one should ever ask to view I sought insight into things not meant to be known just because we wish to I reached with mortal hands for intangibles we are not meant to touch I searched and I did not find answers to questions I should never have asked I learned some deep mysteries cannot be unlocked until the perfect time © 4/17/2000 Donna Friedrichs |
Additional Notes:
Revised 4-20-2000. . . . . As suggested by Rachel I changed line 2 of verse 3 from
"with hands of flesh"
(although I liked that line. I also like the one I chose as an alternative out of all the alternatives I came up with.
Thank you , rachel for pointing that out to me. After you mentioned it I did not like it so much eiter.
"with mortal hands"
I think it is much better and it flows well.
Donna
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