This Poem was Submitted By: Tammy L Ames On Date: 1997-07-12 00:00:00 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Bad Cold

I was ready to     play in the rain  The forecast called     for it yesterday  I waited and waited     anxiously  When the first drop     fell onto my lips  We put on your sweater     to keep warm  Soon it began to pour     with hard drops  but we had felt safe     with your sweater  It wasn't until after     the rain that  I realized your sweater     was ripped  and sure enough I awoke     with a bad cold  Doc says I'll be rid of it     in nine months

Copyright © July 1997 Tammy L Ames

Additional Notes:
Author: Tame E-mail: tame4596@hotmail.com Quote : Flowers Die (crush) You came to me with roses And I pushed you aside I dropped the petals as I walked away And told you "flowers die"


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