This Poem was Submitted By: Dawn Anne Hall On Date: 2001-02-22 20:27:50 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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FROM AN ANGEL - Revised

From An Angel If I were only three, where would I be? I'd be in your arms or on your knee. I'd give you sugar and hugs,  I'd gather a whole bunch of bugs. I would be proud, I'd shout out loud: "Mommy, Daddy, I love you and you love me too." If I were three, I could be four,  when Daddy came home I'd run to the door. I'd jump in his arms with love, He'd hug me from above.  Mommy would smile, she'd hold my hand awhile. She would love me so and I'd never have to go. Yet, I am 5 months old and I did what I was told God sent for me and three I'll never be. God's little angel am I, please don't cry. I am no longer in pain, I don't feel the rain Mommy,  Daddy, I am happy, I am with God you see. Watch me throw the stars for fun...  I swing on the moon, in front of everyone. Look Mommy, I can walk. Look Daddy, I can talk... Please let me go, God needs me so I'll always be here, please, don't shed a tear.

Copyright © February 2001 Dawn Anne Hall

Additional Notes:
I worked at making more like a child would say. I would like your critiques. thanks!!!


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