This Poem was Submitted By: paul lee kannel On Date: 2001-02-26 20:42:23 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Tortured Soul

I know that you hate all of the lies and that you hate life and want to die. That you wish it would just end because you just don't seem to blend in. And how they make you feel like dirt until you can no longer stand the hurt. The way it rips you when they curse until it makes you doubt your worth. And you just don't want to live and you have nothing left to give. That you can't stand it anymore because it hurts you to the core. You can't change them although you try they still hurt you until you cry. And you're not right no matter what you do their words hurt you because they're cruel. I have been in this situation too I have been hurt by a certain few. I know it hurts when they are mean but as time passes it will seem a dream. Don't give up and don't give in if you do then they will win. It all gets better you will see when it does your soul will be free.

Copyright © February 2001 paul lee kannel

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