This Poem was Submitted By: Rachel F. Spinoza On Date: 2001-03-07 17:50:05 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Sudden Exit

Brazen sunset blazes into red and other savage colors that do not blend, but rather weave into a scream of vista; dashing hard against a solid, unrelenting sky. There's nothing tender in this destiny no soft word or  promise of  new bliss  no flannel  gown,  no chamomile  no time for testament or rants of blame or anyone to pardon or forgive. A flicker of a soul, a sudden void just you, but prematurely gray and mute, big-eyed enough for Sacagewea dollar coin.

Copyright © March 2001 Rachel F. Spinoza


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