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Resonance The twigs rustle in rhythm with the drizzling rain, As two lovebirds cheerfully warble over the verdant plain, Where lilacs bloom prettily in their ambrosial sheen. They are flashes of my dream... Then I look at you... Your smile brings a special look, Your resplendent eyes- They bring to me colors of the rainbow from afar the horizon, Your feminine countenance could wake Eros from deific repose. In that magical instant, My heart palpitates with a strange ecstasy, Beating at your heartbeat’s natural frequency. Both of us feel the romantic oscillation. Now, I believe, There is Physics in love! Because our hearts are resonating with love. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Regis L Chapman On Date: 2004-01-29 18:03:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Eros, Physics and Love. Or, The Ambrosia of Physics and Love. Sounds like the title of a book. Maybe your book of poems...?
I like the other recurrent theme of your work is the oscillation. I always think of this as breathing, which is our most direct and changeable aspect of oscillation, with us daily.
As ever, your work deals in the big ideas. I can't get it out of my head when reading your work the visual of sunstruck filtered movies that usually are showing some idealistic picnic in a meadow, with perfect trees and kids playing in the background. I am not sure why that is, but it's certainlly sticking with me throughout my journey through your body of work posted here.
It's like everyone is bigger and better than possible, but then with your words, those impossible things seem only natural- even inevitable. Super stuff.
Thanks,
REEG!