This Poem was Submitted By: David M. Davis On Date: 2001-03-14 10:47:46 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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My Spring Doe

The sky rains down celestial fire  kindling, for you, my budding desire  and lighting, aflame, the funeral pyre  of dark-cold months in platonic mire  Budding trees, no more, look down  to weep for leaves, curled and brown  in tears, for lovers of mine, I drown  'till you and Spring come lift my frown  Flowers, beneath the melting snow,  grip the earth; begin to grow  as to my heart, from under woe  grips verdant love for my spring doe  Dew-drops gather on brittle moss;  purge it gently of winter's frost  as beads of your affections--not one is lost--  my heart collects to lift its dross  From brown to green, from gray to blue,  sunlight, leaf-buds, flowers, dew  Spring has made all things anew  for sake of simile to my love for you 

Copyright © March 2001 David M. Davis

Additional Notes:
I'm really not a poet, and so I don't know what goes into a good poem. My most nagging questions would be in regard to punctuation and capitalization. Please be critical. Thanks, Me


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