This Poem was Submitted By: Tom Atterberry On Date: 2000-03-26 14:37:09 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Asian Flower

Rickshaw driver fast as he can yet my heart controls my tounge Later I feel bad for the terrible words I have flung yet her image in my mind like a moon orchid, touched by dew blooming in my arms controlling my emotional view so long since we've embraced this time I will take her home years it has taken to trace the greatest love I have ever known impatient I surely am but together now forever for all eternity a leathered soft spoken cowboy and my Asian flower from across the sea.  a leathered Okie 

Copyright © March 2000 Tom Atterberry


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