This Poem was Submitted By: Dane Griffin Knezek On Date: 2001-04-09 05:15:48 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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My Blood Bleeds Blue

A line. A streak of brilliance in the sky has no end this childish nonsense messes with my mind has no end like the sky my blood bleeds blue for you I’ll do anything goes in love and war is better than what you put me through a strife inside me tears me apart from you I love my life could be so much more with you I see the streak because … I look up.

Copyright © April 2001 Dane Griffin Knezek

Additional Notes:
This is in the process of being published in the Occidental Review, the yearly literary magazine of Occidental College.


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