This Poem was Submitted By: carole j mennie On Date: 2001-05-01 14:00:40 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!

Click Here To add this poem to your "Voting Possibilities" list!


Prom Date

I knew what I wanted most when I was seventeen, rushing to meet life in a Nash Rambler American with fold-down seats, full ashtrays, and James Dean still playing on the big screen at the Harper Woods Drive In Theater even though he was dead, buried,  and sending psychic messages to his fans from somewhere near Omaha. My prom dress was yellow tulle, strapless, with two crinolines underneath making it hard to sit. But nobody sits down when they're seventeen. I stood outside that pleasure palace, The Grosse Pointe Yacht Club in suburban Detroit, and watched half-child, half-adult shadows laughing, embracing, swaying to the sounds of the Four Freshman and the Diamonds (sha boom,sha boom), and knowing this moment was precious, stored it--the breathlessness of it. one moment, special, snatched up, to be remembered. Listen... they're playing our song.

Copyright © May 2001 carole j mennie

Additional Notes:
This is a rewritten (and re-titled) poem first called "I Knew What I Wanted Most." I'm hoping that it works much better this way...


Sorry, there are no critiques for this poem in our system... If the poem is older, the critiques have been purged! Poetry Contests Online at The Poetic Link

Click HERE to return to ThePoeticLink.com Database Page!