This Poem was Submitted By: Donna I Brisebois On Date: 2000-03-27 08:44:18 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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True Paradise

Ocean waves surging gently over a moon-lit coral reef, singing a hypnotic lullaby, as paradise drifts into sleep. Sweet scent of gardenias carried by the warm tropical breeze. Palm trees swaying rhythmically, tickling the sky with a tease. Dolphins frolic with playfulness, as bright stars alight above. Beach sand is cool beneath us, as we begin to make love. This paradise is lost awhile, with each-other we are entranced,  deep in the throes of passion, hearts beating in a heavenly dance. Renewing our vows of forever, as surroundings sneak back in. Wishing TRUE paradise for eternity, we make love again and again.

Copyright © March 2000 Donna I Brisebois


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