This Poem was Submitted By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2001-05-20 12:40:55 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Looking From the Outside

Tonight by the fire I looked in your eyes uncertianty in me started to rise. I looked at your face the style of your hair feelings I once felt were no longer there. I glanced at my watch I stared at the door suddenly I realized I'd been here before. My heart started to race panic arose as you kissed on me and took off my cloths. And as the night ended I was happy to see I no longer need you for I have finally found me.

Copyright © May 2001 Rene L Bennett


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