This Poem was Submitted By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2001-06-10 05:33:28 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Woke up today with thoughts on my mind, been thinking about things now for sometime. Burdens seem heavy got to lightend the load, still hanging on yet, so hard to hold. Quietness echoes vibrations of screams, never ending  or so it  seems. Lost in darkness I need to get back, Can't live here forever as a matter of fact. I tried to reach you held out my hand, cried and begged you to please understand. Through the tears in my eyes  I watched you walk away, all feelings for you died that day.  

Copyright © June 2001 Rene L Bennett

Additional Notes:
I am throwing some of my old work out here


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